The pacing stumbles in the middle, with repetitive scenes of the sister performing vague magic without advancing the plot. Some readers/viewers might find the “witch” reveal too ambiguous—is she really magical, or is it all the child’s imagination? A few tighter scenes explaining her motives would help. Also, a quick proofread to fix the title’s intentional typo (if it’s intentional) would avoid confusion.
I Raf You Big Sister Is a Witch is a quirky, heartfelt, and at times bewildering short story (or video) that blends childhood innocence with supernatural mischief. The title alone hints at a mix of affection (“I raf you” = childlike “I love you”) and betrayal (“Big sister is a witch”), setting up a conflict that feels both playful and surprisingly deep. I Raf You Big Sister Is A Witch
★★★☆☆ (3.5/5)